Lesson 4 Short burst character description teach.notebook June 08, 2020 The Big Picture To write a character description about your own 'Lost Thing'. 1
Lesson 4 Short burst character description teach.notebook June 08, 2020 Recap - Creating hyphenated words Do you remember learning about creating hyphenated words during our work on 'The London Eye Mystery?' Ted was wearing a light, blue jacket. What does the word 'light' refer to in this sentence? The weight of the jacket. We can replace the comma with a hyphen: Ted was wearing a light-blue jacket. What does the word 'light' refer to in this sentence now? The colour of the blue is light. Would we say that Ted was wearing No, because we can tell that it doesn't make a blue-light jacket? Why? sense. So, we cannot simply place a hyphen between any two words to make a hyphenated word; we must ensure that when we join two separate words with a hyphen, we are making one new word (an adjective) which describes the noun in the sentence. 2
Lesson 4 Short burst character description teach.notebook June 08, 2020 Recap - Creating hyphenated words Do you remember learning about creating hyphenated words during our work on 'The London Eye Mystery?' Ted was wearing a light, blue jacket. What does the word 'light' refer to in this sentence? The weight of the jacket. We can replace the comma with a hyphen: Ted was wearing a light-blue jacket. What does the word 'light' refer to in this sentence now? The colour of the blue is light. Would we say that Ted was wearing No, because we can tell that it doesn't make a blue-light jacket? Why? sense. So, we cannot simply place a hyphen between any two words to make a hyphenated word; we must ensure that when we join two separate words with a hyphen, we are making one new word (an adjective) which describes the noun in the sentence. 3
Lesson 4 Short burst character description teach.notebook June 08, 2020 Describe The Lost Thing using as many hyphenated words as you can. Remember, a hyphenated word is where two words have been joined with a hyphen to make an adjective that describes a noun. rusty-orange shell (Rusty describes the colour orange and together, the hyphenated words describe the noun). 4
Lesson 4 Short burst character description teach.notebook June 08, 2020 Let's look at this passage from The Lost Thing... Shaun's parents are adamant that he get rid of The Lost Thing. However, maybe Shaun could persuade them to let The Lost Thing stay if they knew how useful he could be... 5
Lesson 4 Short burst character description teach.notebook June 08, 2020 Complete the grid before moving onto the next slide with features of the lost thing and what they might be useful for. Use Feature 6
Lesson 4 Short burst character description teach.notebook June 08, 2020 Complete the grid before moving onto the next slide with features of the lost thing and what they might be useful for. Feature Use - Rusty-orange shell/large stature - Scares off prying eyes -Glossy varnish - Stops it from getting wet -Muscular tentacles - Helps it run faster -Prickly head - Sends radiowaves to communicate with other species -Steaming spouts - Releases hot steam to avoid too much pressure -Numerous windows and doors - Inside, cogs turn to operate the lost thing's movement -Bladed forks with tinkling bells - Signals its arrival/helps with navigation -Concealed wires - Sends electrical signals to other lost things -Propeller - Propels the lost thing forward. 7
Lesson 4 Short burst character description teach.notebook June 08, 2020 Your challenge is to write a short character description focusing on how The Lost Thing works, what the different parts of him do and how useful he could be. This is different from character descriptions we have written in the past (e.g. based on Coraline) because it does not focus on how he looks. Teacher Shared Emerging from the base of his rusty-orange shell are six muscular tentacles that serve as legs. As he has six legs, The Lost Thing can run much more quickly than me (with only two legs) so he would be brilliant at running errands - he'd have them done in no time! 8
Lesson 4 Short burst character description teach.notebook June 08, 2020 Date LO: I can write a character description including hyphenated words Bronze Stick the picture into your book and write a short description of how The Lost Thing works. Describe 2 features and describe why it is useful. Aim to include three or four hyphenated words as adjectives. Silver Complete Bronze including 3 features and their uses. Also include a semi colon to join two main clauses together. Remember, each of the clauses must make sense on its own and they should have something in common. Gold Complete Silver including 4 features and their uses. Also aim to include three varieties of subordinate clause: FSC, ESC and a subordinate clause at the end of a sentence. The ESC can be a relative clause. Challenge - Use a thesaurus to ensure that your description contains many Challenge examples of HQV. 9
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