Monday: Lesson One
LO: To identify different poetic features
Key Poetry Definitions • Alliteration- using words from the same sound, not just the same letter (slithering snakes, mischievous monkeys…) • Rhyming- words that have a close similarity in the final sounds (bike and hike, plane and train, sunny and funny) • Verse- a part of a poem where words can be arranged in a rhythmic pattern.
The Tyger by William Blake What the hammer? what the chain, Tyger Tyger, burning bright, In what furnace was thy brain? In the forests of the night; What the anvil? what dread grasp, What immortal hand or eye, Dare its deadly terrors clasp! Could frame thy fearful symmetry? When the stars threw down their spears What poetic And water'd heaven with their tears: In what distant deeps or skies. features can you Did he smile his work to see? Burnt the fire of thine eyes? find in this poem? Did he who made the Lamb make thee? On what wings dare he aspire? What the hand, dare seize the fire? Tyger Tyger burning bright, In the forests of the night: And what shoulder, & what art, What immortal hand or eye, Could twist the sinews of thy heart? Dare frame thy fearful symmetry? And when thy heart began to beat, What dread hand? & what dread feet?
Rhyming/Rhyming Couplets Tyger Tyger, burning bright, In the forests of the night; A rhyming couplet is a pair of sentences which rhyme at the end.
Alliteration In what distant deeps or skies. Can you think of some other examples of your own? Eg. Leaping lizards beautiful birds
The Jaguar by Ted Hughes The apes yawn and adore their fleas in the sun. On a short fierce fuse. Not in boredom — The eye satisfied to be blind in fire, The parrots shriek as if they were on fire, or strut By the bang of blood in the brain deaf the ear — Like cheap tarts to attract the stroller with the nut. He spins from the bars, but there’s no cage to Fatigued with indolence, tiger and lion him More than to the visionary his cell: Lie still as the sun. The boa- constrictor’s coil His stride is wildernesses of freedom: Is a fossil. Cage after cage seems empty, or The world rolls under the long thrust of his heel. Stinks of sleepers from the breathing straw. Over the cage floor the horizons come . It might be painted on a nursery wall. But who runs like the rest past these arrives At a cage where the crowd stands, stares, mesmerized, As a child at a dream, at a jaguar hurrying enraged Mini-Activity: Can you spot any rhyming or Through prison darkness after the drills of his eyes alliteration?
Let’s share what we found… Rhyming Alliteration
Over to you… Read the following poetic sentences and identify whether: rhyming or alliteration has been used: 1. The sharp shape of a shark just below the surface. 2. The roaring yawn of a fawn at dawn. 3. The magnificent monkeys were moving majestically. 4. Green grass blew gracefully in the breeze. 5. The golden eagle shivered in the cold. 6. Standing still, Stanley stood staring.
Answers Read the following poetic sentences and identify whether rhyming or alliteration has been used: 1. The sharp shape of a shark just below the surface. ALLITERATION 2. The roaring yawn of a fawn at dawn. RHYMING 3. The magnificent monkeys were moving majestically. ALLITERATION 4. Green grass blew gracefully in the breeze. ALLITERATION 5. The golden eagle shivered in the cold. RHYMING 6. Standing still, Stanley stood staring. ALLITERATION
Tuesday: Lesson Two
LO: To write a poem in the style of ‘The Tyger ’ by William Blake
Features to include Rhyming Couplets Mini Task: Complete the following rhyming couplet Alliteration Swimming swiftly across the sea, ________________________________
Let’s have a go together… 1. Firstly, let’s choose an animal for our poem eg . ‘ The Monkee ’ Note that in William Blake’s ‘The Tyger ’ he has spelt tiger incorrectly. Think of a different way to spell the name of your animal. 2. Next, let’s look at ‘The Tyger ’ and use it’s style to write the start of a shared poem. 3. Your own poems will need to be between 4 and 6 verses.
Shared Write Tyger Tyger, burning bright, Monkee monkee, flying free, In the forests of the night; Making your way through each tree; What immortal hand or eye, Where are you going, who are you with? Could frame thy fearful symmetry? Are you travelling back to where you live? In what distant deeps or skies. Burnt the fire of thine eyes? On what wings dare he aspire? What the hand, dare seize the fire?
Planning your poem • Use the planning sheet to organise the ideas for your poem. • Your poem needs to be at least four verses (4 lines per verse). • It must include the features: rhyming couplets, alliteration. • CHALLENGE: Could you include a metaphor or simile in one of your verses?
Use the writing template to write up your poem before copying it up neatly and add illustrations.
Recommend
More recommend